Thursday, May 28, 2020
The backstory of my character Lily J!
Hello. Due to some unfortunate formatting I will just be leaving the link so it will be better to read. Here is the link: Click here
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Yikes Jeneva, that’s a very dark story but such a great beginning - you hooked me right in which is the sign of a skilled writer.
ReplyDeleteYou need to do some tidying and polishing though. Remember to use caps for Milwaukee and December, and perhaps make the doctor either a he or a she.
I hope you get to finish the story...how does lily get away...??
Spoiler alert! She dosent escape and who said the docter couldent be a they/them?
DeleteOops I should have used my caps properly too shouldn’t I. LOL.
ReplyDeleteA capital L for Lily!