six sentence story

Once upon a time there lived a fancy ol’ chap called Jonathan Voshwix. Mr Voshwix lived in a very snowy forest in Greenland. Mr Voshwix had a spectacular talent, he can call the animals to himself in times of need. Because of his talent there are lots of people everyday cutting down trees and searching the forest for him.Mr Voshwix was so scared because so many of his friends were losing their home and dieing. So Mr Voshwix took immediate action and remembered that his mom was an ice goddess, so he froze all of the machines to stop them from working and made it cold enough for some of the most dangerous animals to rule like polar bears and wolves.

                                 

                                                                      ❅*.THE END.*❅

my writing

this week i have been leaning to describe settings and "show don't tell" so here's what i have created <3









I wake up on a hard sand ground, I look around, almost nothing but trees. I’m soaking wet with my body half in the water, half on land. “How long have i been in the water?” i thought to myself. I’ve got enough strength to get up. The clear blue water surrounds me. It looks like it will rain soon.i walk into the trees to collect materials and set up a camp. I make a hut out of sticks and lay huge palm leaves on top to cover the holes.

character description: Sailor Moon

Sailor moon has yellow hair like gold coins. Her round diamond face blushes. Skin as soft as a baby's bottom. Shining royal blue eyes. A soft and sweet smile. Her cobalt blue skirt flows in the wind. Her arms may look like noodles but she packs quite the punch. She wears her red slide-on shoes with a few scuffs on the toe.