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Thursday, September 13, 2018

my writing

this week i have been leaning to describe settings and "show don't tell" so here's what i have created <3









I wake up on a hard sand ground, I look around, almost nothing but trees. I’m soaking wet with my body half in the water, half on land. “How long have i been in the water?” i thought to myself. I’ve got enough strength to get up. The clear blue water surrounds me. It looks like it will rain soon.i walk into the trees to collect materials and set up a camp. I make a hut out of sticks and lay huge palm leaves on top to cover the holes.

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